“I love the tracks left by hundreds of species of birds that remain in the air like we do”
– Jim Harrison
Cry of the heron
Notes left behind in the dust
Song of broken wing
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Ok, I am trying lately to wrap my mind around how to do Haiku worthily and this is like a lesson in perfection for me. Take something from nature and write about the nature, but have something of the human condition subtly slipped between the lines – implied. This Haiku is painful and relatable and raw with emotion.
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Thanks! Yes, it is a very, very interesting challenge. Too easy to slip into simple and bland. How to let simple become complex, right? The funny thing is that until a year or so ago, I hated Haiku, and I was the last person to be willing to write one!
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But I still want the T-Shirt.
Haiku is easy….
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Ahahaha! Indeed. We should write a Haiku is easy Haiku Haiku shirt.
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Haikus ain’t easy
As my brains drip from my ears
Refrigerator
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Yes!
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Haiku so easy
Greeting card sales are soaring
A story you know
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Haiku so easy
Greeting card sales are soaring
A story you know
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