“We walk the bottom of an ocean we call sky”
– Jim Harrison (Day Sixteen – 28 Days of Unreason)
Light’s flash up and down
Waterfall tumbles rainbows
Dizzy, flustered fish
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qbit 
Dizzy, flustered fish – that could be me at the moment (or always)! Waterfall tumbling rainbows is just beautiful.
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Waterfall tumbles rainbows
dizzy, flustered fish.
That’s some great imagery. Love what you did with this.
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A wild waterfall ride! A slightly unconventional haiku — fitting of a the man who saw the world differently through his one remaining eye.
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Flash & tumble are acurate descriptions of a weir. There is an upside down feel to this Haiku that fits the quote and an unsettling feeling that comes with the man-imposed alterations to the river.
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Thanks! BTW, did you see my post from the other day? Or did it push the bounds of Haiku decorum sufficiently it was “no comment”, LOL! https://qbit.blog/2017/07/30/haiku-party-moon/
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I completely missed it… See there, my irrational question about the square root of stress makes complete sense!
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Love this fish’s eye view of a waterfall. Great perspective!
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Thanks!
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