“Nature has portals, rather than doors”
– Jim Harrison (Day Twenty-Four– 28 Days of Unreason)
Kelp, brack, salt and mud
Moon pulls blanket from the bed –
Smell slams angry door
- Comment
- Reblog
-
Subscribe
Subscribed
Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
qbit 
I love your work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!!
LikeLike
A true haiku of the earth… that reveals something about mankind as well. You do these well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I just worry they are all sort of grumpy…
LikeLiked by 1 person
They are… we are!
LikeLiked by 1 person
We are! So good!
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLike
There’s a bit of meter about that first line – it wants repeating just for the sound. The moon pulling the blanket and the angry response is sensuous and emotionally laden, but on the simpler level it evokes memories of nature through the smells. Like this one a great deal!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I was MIA yesterday but will try and get caught up.
LikeLiked by 1 person
and you were missed. 🙂
LikeLike
Love this!!
LikeLiked by 1 person