Our swan meets Nikki Papandreou,
The Greek Olympic diver
[Your couplet…]
[Repeat 5x]
Administration, Thoughts, Plots, Plans &tc:
Proposed as a Renga of unstructured couplets for two people, but certainly fun if folks want to do one with more people, although then we’d probably want 20 couplets instead of 10.
I’m hoping that by keeping each writer to two lines, our push/pull on each other stays strong, but leaves enough room to develop a new idea, pivot, etc.
PLEASE SIGN UP IN THE COMMENTS BELOW, and we will work out logistics and kick off the working versions in another post.
Group Renga for Jilly’s October Casting Bricks Challenge
More background and thoughts on Regna: here.
Hmmm – a bit baffled, here. Not sure if you are going completely political / metaphoric or if one of that family was also an athlete. (Out of touch on international sports.)
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I woke up at 4AM and wrote down my dream, which had instructed me to submit this as my Renga. I do what my dreams tell me, so now have inflicted this on you. I have no idea whatsoever what it is about, nor how to pivot from it. Best of luck to us all. LOLOL!
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Perhaps it was that leg cramp that woke me at 4AM telling me I should nibble on this one. Think I can give it a go, but first, I need a shot of whiskey and some shut eye… or some Newman-type line like that…
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Hahaha! Actually, I mulled it over after I got up in the morning, and then decided to go ahead. I thought what the heck, let’s see what comes out.
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Funny, I had a Renga challenge pop into my head in the middle of the night a few days ago and it was gone by morning… but I’m pretty sure there was water in that pool. This one is empty – sudden death awaits! LOL!
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Sounds like you are off to a great start!
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“WTF?” is a perfectly appropriate reaction.
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Yeah, did that one…
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Look, we’re that good. We will find a way.
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Couplet:
“Brandishing a cygnet ring
Bargaining with Poseidon’s wave”
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Nice! You pulled in Greek gods and myths, now we are rolling!
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🙂 … but you totally ignored the pun; respect the pun! (Especially since it’s not my strong suit.)
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OK, moved to here: https://qbit.blog/2017/10/08/renga-swan-dive-qbitjilly
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Updated on the new thread
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Cygnet for Signet! That was available but not explicit until you made the point. Nice!
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I think I missed the boat on this one? I’ve still not quite worked out what is going on. Count me in for next month, looks like a lot of fun…
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You don’t have to wait! If you want to try it I will start a post, and you and I take turns adding couplets in the comments.
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go on then…why not…?
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OK, we can continue from this post. https://qbit.blog/2017/10/09/renga-swan-dive-qbitsarasouthwest/ You write the next couplet, just add a comment. We shoot for ten couplets in all, but can follow our noses if we want to change that. The trick is to eventually find our way back to an ending, lol!
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I have veered away from Greek mythology, on the grounds that you seem to have done that one!
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Here is a finished one: http://wp.me/p8baZJ-g9
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