“Winter dead ahead” That phrase is so poetically laden… especially if transplanted out of the haiku form. Given your chosen stomping grounds, I would think that it’s possible to come across some “winter dead ahead.” On that cheery thought… the rest of the haiku is great!
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“Winter dead ahead” That phrase is so poetically laden… especially if transplanted out of the haiku form. Given your chosen stomping grounds, I would think that it’s possible to come across some “winter dead ahead.” On that cheery thought… the rest of the haiku is great!
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Thanks! I was sort of fond of that line, lol!
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Then by all means use it again! No law against it.
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Ah! Classic Q – ‘winter dead ahead’ gives the sense of motion and collision. Your wry voice is ever amazing.
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Damn, now I think I underplayed it. November should attempt surrender but then meet its demise anyway in the last line. Too mamby-pamby as is, lol!
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Haha! What? November is weak – it gives in to the power-play of December and his henchmen.
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Yes. LOLOL!
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Winter rides shotgun
November panics and runs
Mowed down in a hail
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Hahaha!!!!
Perfect. Al Capone meets Winter.
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Ahahah! Thanks for the idea!
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I love, rain surrenders frost.
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