That unbeknownst to all,
slumber requires
a leap dream –
like a leap year –
an extra turn or toss
of night
to true up
the gaps in our days,
alms, for shadows
gone begging.
And explains, so, finally,
never feeling quite
caught up
to ourselves.
For dVerse Quadrille #47
Where our shadows went begging. You wrote some beautiful lines with a strong finish 🥂
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Thanks!! Took a leap with this one.
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👍
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This is one of your best. The first three lines of this reached out and pulled me in. What great imagination…leap dreams.
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Thank you so much!!!
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You are so very welcome.
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I like that leap dream and this part:
alms, where our shadows
went begging.
Thanks for joining us and wishing you a happy new year!
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Thanks!!
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Pulled right in with the almost plaintive:”That unbeknownst to all..”. Truly lovely piece.
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Thank you so much!
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Great write, Q! You’re best so far. Love your metaphor of the leap dream, and your cadence is spot on! Happy New Year!
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Thanks!!! And Happy New Year to you too!
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I do like this. I recognise that restlessness, that need for something a little more from sleep. You’ve captured it beautifully.
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Thanks!
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The whole thing. The last stanza had me reminded …
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This is so great. I love how this poem sort of creates its own reality and by the end we are convinced!
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Thanks!
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I like the idea of a “leap dream”.
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Thanks!
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This is wonderful, q. Dream on!
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Ahahaha! Thanks!
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To me this represent the best we can get from the shadows of the night… that mending of a bonus dream… Tonight it was a nightmare though.
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Ouch!
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I think I’ve been too generous with my shadows but I still don’t feel caught up to myself. A lovely poem and photo.
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Firstly, thanks for sharing the Full Wolf Moon – low & total cloud cover kept it from our skies. The use of alms & begging make this poem the powerhouse it is!
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“to true up / the gaps in our days, / alms, for shadows / gone begging” I won’t damage your humility by telling you how wonderful these lines are. The muse was with you, young one! Give in to the muse.
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Thanks. You got me going with your Quadrille. Then my mind started in with “leap, lap, lurp? Nah. Leap jump jimp? Crap, no. Ah s*t. Now I’m screwed. No idea. “
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“‘Crap, no. Ah s*t. Now I’m screwed. No idea.'” My work was done… right there! Glad to be of use. 🙂
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Thanks. Glad you like the photo too. I can’t begin to describe the boondoggle behind that in which ice began to fill the harbor, all the boats were cancelled, and the ferry terminal turned into a First World refugee camp. If the latte had run out it would have been feral. Hours of jumping up and down in zero degree weather to keep warm resulted in being in exactly the right place at the right time as the moon and the ferry both appeared on the horizon. Somehow all that turned into this poem. I have now explanation. I blamed it all on Charley in his comment.
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*no explanation.
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“If the latte had run out it would have been feral.” The Nantucket Uprising of 2018. Images of L. L. Bean- and Land’s End-clad city dwellers driven mad by the seemingly perverse lack of Starbuck’s sustenance! The mind reels at the thought.
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Entire families were reduced to huddling in their Land Rovers for warmth, Like where was FEMA?
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Excellent punch lines: Shadows gone begging. wow! Great write my friend. 🙂
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Thanks!! And welcome back!
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You welcome. And its good to be back and have something new posted. Home is home. 🙂
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