A lifetime of trawling cod
from the Gulf of Maine –
a fisherman I knew
Would spray WD-40 on his knees.
Even better than motor oil he said –
and rub it in deep into the joints.
Gotta get some swing
back in the
hinges,
He said.
The body not a door
that closes with age,
But a boom that
sweeps and hauls out
over the waves
Year after year.
Close to the salt
but not of it.
For The Twiglets
Wow! That was excellent.
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Thank you!
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My grandmother swore by WD40 on her ankles and knees. Excellent poetry.
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Awesome.
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Sometimes the old ways are the best.
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Yes, I think they are.
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Nice! The structure has a hinged feel to it and I like the narrative voice. Interesting end line – multiple ways of reading that…
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Thanks. Yes, that last line meant to prompt a couple of different thoughts.
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I love this poetic feel.
And these lines: “a fisherman I knew
Would spray WD-40 on his knees.
Even better than motor oil he said –
and rub it in deep into the joints.”
Believe it or not, and this is a true story. My older brother had this crazy insane idea of putting WD-40 on joint pains. He convince my own dad to try it on his own legs because my dad suffers from joint pain. He did so, and my dad felt more pain and his whole leg felt irritated and my dad was upset and mad. My brother tried it on himself as so he claims nothing happen to him. hahahahaha!!! My brother is an idiot. I don’t know where he got that idea of curing someone from joint pain by using WD-40. Anyway, all in all…I love this whole entire poetic narrative. 🙂
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Thanks. A couple of folks have said they had family members try this. Amazing. Seems like such a bad plan, lol!
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Yes, it is a bad idea. Trust me. Don’t.
P.S I posted something interesting and a fun game to solve. 🙂
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really enjoyed the contrast of a swing door and a swinging boom, images of hiking out over salt water also fed my mind. And of course, Windex in “My Big Fat Greek Wedding” (or something like that)
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Thank you! Glad you liked that. Yes, I forgot about that in MBFGW.
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