it’s insane I want to bite
the fire-roasted apple of you,
my teeth breaking the char,
the crust, of your tasty your
sweet boiling
fruit of knowledge burnt
by meteor flight,
still smoking, still glowing
under all that dirt you kicked up
ejecta, trajectory, projecting
radiance like lava
under ash, I want to
drink what is molten in you,
quaff my cool thirst
in your fire
For The Sunday Muse
Wow. This is magnificent, the imagery that makes me simultaneously hungry (not that I’m normally a fan of apples) and awed at the perceived purposeful aim of this meteoric apple. Where did it come from and why?
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Hot. Hot. Hot. and I love it!
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Clever eroticism, methinks!
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Indeed!
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Wow this certainly awakens the senses! Breathtaking imagery Qbit!!
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This is WONDERFUL!!!!!!! What a fabulous response to the prompt. “Your sweet boiling…….to drink what is molten in you.” Wow.
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Much appreciated!
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Good golly, this is good!
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Who knew an apple could be so seductive 😉
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Ah, yes.
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I can taste toffee apple reading this suffused with an erotic aroma
“fruit of knowledge burnt
by meteor flight,” – Cor! Or maybe core?!
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Thanks!!!
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So…just dying to get that little black dress off of her, aren’t you? 😉
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Wow, perfect.
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Eve might have been thinking this before taking a bite–or Adam, anticipating his. Very sensual, and I love the position of knowledge in that flow.
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Oh my,s is one steamy apple poem…love it!
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Drenched in eroticism, and juicy as well.
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kaykuala
drink what is molten in you,
quaff my cool thirst
in your fire
Great ending with classic word craft throughout the whole poem
Hank
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“Quaff my cool thirst in your fire…”
I’m simply molten after reading this; although it starts out with such hot longing, he’s certainly cooled down by the end of the poem…. climax then the withdrawal.
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LOL! Yes.
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So sexy and raw. Oh yes!
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Thanks!
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