The time traveler’s wife
asked me to bring back a carton of smokes
From 1972, since it was way cheaper
and still cool, and she could light up inside
instead of bumbling in the rain
Also pick up some orange juice and eggs,
and don't forget to close the wormhole behind me
like yesterday, when I let loose the gerbils and
guinea pigs, escaping though runway tubes
between dimensions
And please patty-cake or do-se-do
with the refrigerator, or whatever it is I do,
so that today’s failing avocados come back perfectly
ripe, grab that toast 30 seconds earlier
before it burns
Instead, might I take back what I said, an hour
a day, a month, a year ago?
Time unleashes the past like a furious river,
words, a flood of tumbling wreckage
and drowning cars
Or find that spot just above the artery
where I can tie off regret with a tourniquet
of silk cord, stanch the memory
and blood of loss which stain
the hourglass so red
For Shay’s Word Garden
Brilliant.
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Oh, thank you so much!
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This would be well worth playing around with. Some really good stuff there already, and the ideas beginning to get more interesting toward the end.
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Ah, yes, thank you. Some early draft stuff that might have some payoff if I can work it.
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Oh goodness, I love the pets scampering between dimensions via their habitrails. Outlandish! What a question–what could we change, and would we change, if we could? And would that be a good thing or not? And would the redness disappear, stay the same, be worse, or turn some other color? Have some avocado toast and think about it?
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Ooooh! I like changing the color! Maybe alaso flood of avocado toast, too much of a good thing.
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This is fabulous… such a great mix of ideas about what time travel could do for us. The funny the mundane, the retrievals, the heart ache. I really love this one.
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Ah, thank you so much!!
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By far the best space time-traveler poem I’ve ever read here.
Man, you took me on a journey and back. Visually eye popping and brilliant as hell. 🙂
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