Crow blows hot and cold
Nest a soup of chicken bones –
Bird flu spreads its wings
For Frank’s Haikai Challenge
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The Quantumverse
Crow blows hot and cold
Nest a soup of chicken bones –
Bird flu spreads its wings
For Frank’s Haikai Challenge
qbit 
Such a creative poem despite being so short and concise!
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Thank you!!
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Very clever! I like the nest being a bowl of soup bones…
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Thank you!
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Excellent!!
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Thank you so much!
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Such a word painting of the flu! Cleverly done.
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Appropriate and clever. Flu must be a later winter kigo in itself.
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That’s a great idea! I love that.
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I always take qbit poems… with a twist! Well done, grassjumper!
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Hahaha! Thanks!!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (1/29/18): qbit’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Fantastic Haiku poem. The imagery is outstanding. Reminded me of “Captain Beefheart”.
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Love the satiric take!
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Thanks!
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“Nest a soup of chicken bones” the cradle of microscopic life (shiver) just thinking about make want a shower
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