Like the last drops
of whiskey
I shake my words
into this poem;
I’m a man taken to drink
at the cost of his family and job –
One round for the house
and one for the Pope and
very last call
to the Devil.
For Quadrille Monday
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qbit 
I know that feeling… poems are wrung with the last effort… still have a job, but sometimes I think I might not be worth it.
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Thanks, yes. But poetry pulls on me all day no matter what. Lol!
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I loved the structure of this and how you made it flow. Nice work! You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!
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Sounds like a scene in a movie. Love it.
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Oh, ya, right – just one more. Love it!
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Just.. One… More…
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jazzy’s, right–a great intro for a movie or novel. Sad story in the end.
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Oh, my friend. I feel this, deeply. Your word choices and line breaks are spot on. I am a fellow poem addict. We can laugh, but yes, there is a cost.
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Thanks! Yes indeed. Poetry is so wonderful, but not without cost. And doesn’t much pay the bills either, lol!
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Re
Tired
AS PoEtry
Dance And
SonG LonG
Flicker
Flame
Torch
BonFire HiGH
SAin’T ELmo’sT FiRE..:)
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Great!!
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Thanks
For
The
Inspiration
Of Your
Poetry
With
SMiLes..:)
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Wonderful! This felt like the opening scene in a movie.
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Thanks!
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I love your description of how poetry consumes us….
Dwight
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Much appreciated!
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Poetry does come at a cost, doesn’t it? I felt this poem deeply. Good work.
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I liked giving the devil his due at the end.
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Wonder if there are any Poetry Anonymous groups?!
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Ahahaha! Yes, we need one of those!
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This is heartbreaking, and I really like the title. Not a last call at the depressing dive bar, but a last, lackadaisical call for sympathy, maybe even a helping hand.
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Devil take it, is what I think sometimes too. But only sometimes 🙂
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Hahaha! Yes.
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🙂
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This feels like the opening scene of a blockbuster movie ❤️ Beautifully haunting!
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An addiction to poetry seems a healthy pastime to me!!
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There is an older movie called Keeping the Faith. This poem could be read by the priest who walks into the bar at the beginning of the movie. It’s that good, q!
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A poet walks inti to a bar… Whack! Ouch! Goddammit!
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But the rabbi ducked.
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*into
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And thanks!
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You are welcome!
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Oh, you got me with the whiskey right away, angst of last drops. It’s a condition they say.
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This was the sober version of the poem. I should have said that I sniff the fumes of the bottle in near desperation, lol!
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…the house, the Pope, and the devil … an unlikely trinity!
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Hahaha! Yes.
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drinking with the devil… keep an eye on your tab, just saying
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