11 thoughts on “Haiku – Open Water

  1. There’s a bit of meter about that first line – it wants repeating just for the sound. The moon pulling the blanket and the angry response is sensuous and emotionally laden, but on the simpler level it evokes memories of nature through the smells. Like this one a great deal!

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