Haiku – Thanksgiving

Pine needles give way
Holiday feast of rain, mud –
Thankful for new boots

10 thoughts on “Haiku – Thanksgiving”

revivedwriter says:

November 23, 2017 at 9:19 am

I like how you compared aspects of nature to a holiday feast.

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1. qbit says:
  
  November 23, 2017 at 9:23 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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Frank J. Tassone says:

November 23, 2017 at 9:46 am

Great haiku, Q! I like he juxtaposition!

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1. qbit says:
  
  November 23, 2017 at 10:01 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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  1. Frank J. Tassone says:
    
    November 23, 2017 at 10:04 am
    
    My pleasure 😇
    
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Frank J. Tassone says:

November 23, 2017 at 9:47 am

Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #2: qbit’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!

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jillys2016 says:

November 23, 2017 at 1:29 pm

That first line comes laden with much, including the scent.

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Colin Lee says:

November 23, 2017 at 8:58 pm

Happy holiday, my friend. 🙂

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1. qbit says:
  
  November 23, 2017 at 8:59 pm
  
  Thanks!!!
  
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