(For J&C)
You said “Goodby Ruby Tuesday” to me before clicking the lid shut on your jewel-box car – redlining home with your heist in the passenger seat, her hair the theft of every red sky at morning warnIng you of the storms ahead. But you had wound and knotted my vision to a rocket – gravity harpooned to its soul – spoutIng fire into water-black sky in its fury to escape the barbs set by iron laws of the land. My heart caught in the coils – a Nantucket sleighride dragging me skyward away from the river, the estuary, the sea, the whale-road home – instead of sanctuary, you – if you call me Ishmael, I will call you Ahab – sank us on the graveyard moon where you filled coffee cans with ashes of the dead. If I fall to my knees next to you and dig, dig all the way to China, will I find scrimshaw runes of my mother and father written on bones? Will my lips be caked with dust from kissing the lunar ground where I was tossed ashore by the Sea of Tranquility in a meteor storm? Will you find your lost limb when you hobble to the trunk of your car In the moonlight? Back in our story a ruby slipper was still on her foot when her leg washed onto the rocks. Like me, she must have clicked her heels three times and said “there’s no place like home” so we could sleep with the fishes and dream of rivers and the sea where what we’ve lost sinks out of sight to where there is no light – where like a blind fish, my hair luminous, waving in the merman dark – I ask her name and there is no reply.
For Desperate Poets OLN (and Desperate Crossings)
For Ruby Tuesday prompts
A brilliant write, qbit
~David
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Thank you!!
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so vivid. the references to Bradford’s and Melville’s novels latched me onto that sleigh-ride and then the deep dive, right along with you.
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Thanks!
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Tough assignment when the daemon inside all poetry is Ahab and his song is “gravity harpooned to its soul.” This poem sailed both abominable and oblique while shedding brilliant salt. What’s a poet to do but hang with the mermen “on the whale-road to a home / which is no sanctuary.” That’s the best I could net of this runaway barque. What is Ruby Tuesday?
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Lol! This poem was like the Peqod going down and settling at the bottom in the dark. All hands lost. “Ruby Tuesday” is a prompt without an online presence.
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Apt metaphor for the moment.
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She comes and goes ~~~ great write qbit!
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Exactly.
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Intriguing.
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