XOXO
Doctor F., slip-sliding blood, stents in the wrong heart –
all pig parts now – and I am a wild boar, snorting and rutting –
Then new eyes, eagle-twitched with talon lust, I’m a bird
lifting the gurney, arms and elbows reconstructing flight –
What else could I expect after my wife and the nurse
played tic-tac-toe with a sharpie on my neck and back,
the locations of incision marked for winning and losing –
Lord! My organ donor is the Mormon Tabernacle! Where go all
those pipes! Staves for vocal chords, Bach pulling my nose stops,
Toccata and Fugue I arise, Oh Creature, and know my aloneness
for the first time. And yet… I am large, I contain multitudes,
the pull of zoötic moons, monstrosity a begetting, like gravity
For Shay’s Word Garden
Wow, you have described this brilliantly. The powerful images of “eagle-twitched with talon lust” and the arms and elbows reconstructing flight are so powerful. I most love “I am large, I contain multitudes.” Such amazing writing.
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Thank you so much Sherry!
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Hey qbit, the imagery here is incredible but I’m not confident that I understand it enough to make an intelligent remark. This stanza is total magic: “Then new eyes, eagle-twitched with talon lust, I’m a bird / lifting the gurney, arms and elbows reconstructing flight –”.
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Nothing to understand just me riffing as usual, lol! Glad you liked the imagery!
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omG! I was confused if there was a theme here or not, but once you got to the MTC this thing did grow wings! Transformed into a bizarre hybrid human/pipe organ! Shades of Corso! Shine on you crazy mutant!
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Hahaha!! Yes! Like what do you get if you cross Mary Shelley, a pig, an eagle, the MTC, Walt Whitman and me!!
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Hmm. Proceed!
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this was refreshing and made me smile – also reminded me of William Burroughs! Jae
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Thank you Jae!!!
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This is STRIKING! The animal transformations, musical references and especially the playfulness of the tic tac toe with a sharpie. WOW.
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Thank you!!
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