Again, city of the dead,
where there are no words
for higher ground.
Young girls have come,
hair still wet and tangled
from unstill river arms –
turn and spin and down and darkness,
until lungs confess their air,
breathe in prayers of water.
Silent, as they must be.
Simply, without fear,
as they must be.
Among the living, no words
for child, name, voice.
We drown in broken promises.
This poem hits the heart – those girls with wet and tangled hair…….not just broken promises, but betrayal, by those in charge who have no clue what they are doing. Wonderful writing, qbit. Really good.
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Thanks Sherry.
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Amazing. Awful. Disturbing. Poetry done as only the best can do it.
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Thank you.
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Great poem and heartbreaking. You should send this to the poems about News articles.
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I really love that whole middle section of stanzas 2-4! Did you forget a title?
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Untitled seemed the right choice. Thanks.
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Thinking… You might have something there. Could cut the first and last stanza, strip it to the bone.
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The 4th stanza does feel like the natural end. The 3rd stanza for me is especially beautiful and devastating.
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Thank you Sunra
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I wouldn’t do that. The poem needs all five IMO.
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Haunting, qbit, and so well told.
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The ending of the poem punched me right in the face. Everything about the poem is so good.
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