20 thoughts on “Slight

  1. The short, clipped lines emphasize the overall feel of this outstanding poem. The form feels like a jilting cup of coffee being spilled and being awake in the wee small hours. That last line, of course, is a show-stopper. This is such a well crafted bit of art, my friend!

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