23 thoughts on “Delivery

  1. Holy crap.
    Excuse my almost-French.
    But good lord, man. So SO good.

    THIS:
    “delivering us to morning
    in scrubs of light –
    and us squalling our birthright
    across the broken waters”

    What a metaphor you have spun here, and the word as a title A.C.E. is just brilliant.

    LOVE.this.

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  2. an acerbic wit belies these lines – absolutely brilliantly contrived and composed and only a great imagination could have construed ‘ace’ as the A.C.E. with us ” squalling our birthright
    across the broken waters,”

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