The crack of dawn…
is like a big taco!
OK, a big breakfast taco –
scrambled egg clouds
stuffed in a flour tortilla.
The sun split your sleep
against the bowl
and whisked your dreams.
It’s quite a mouthful.
You’re going to need salsa.
Quadrille for dVerse
I wish every morning had salsa …
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LOL! Agreed!!
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What a fun morning!
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Tasty too!
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The sun split your sleep
against the bowl
and whisked your dreams.
Seems like the sun always interrupts just when things are getting good!
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For sure. Damn sun.
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:<(
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I like that last line about needing salsa.
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MAN, these are some cool images. Love love LOVE:
“The sun split your sleep
against the bowl
and whisked your dreams.”
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LOL! Thanks!
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This poem of yours is brilliant, surreal, and packed with great delicious humor on the side. 🙂
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Ahahaha! Thanks!
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You are welcome Qbit.
So glad to read your work. Hope you post more and I’ll be there to read and comment. 🙂
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That 3rd stanza! Fabulous and so original.
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Thank you!!!
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Oh my–this was so much fun! Thank you for the delicious laugh.
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Lol! Thanks!
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That’s an unforgettable metaphor! I want to eat those “scrambled egg clouds.”
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Hahaha! Yep!
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Tasty dawn! 😉
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Delightful, and tasty too!
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That was fun! I may wake up hungry in the morning!
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Lol!
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Creative and clever! An enjoyable read 🙂
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Someone woke up hungry and full of energy, both which make a fabulous start to a day.
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I remember such breakfasts… usually they lasted past lunch for me.
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That’s great!
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I’ll have another, please … and warm up that joe. Crack of heaven, indeed.
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That was very cool. My mind playfully jumped around the analogies. Nice !
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Thanks!
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