Renga – Rasta Bones (qbit/Jilly)

Rasta bones
Litter the rocks

Jerk scented air
Reggaes the walk

A hungry dog
Is an angry dog

The hum of meat
Vibrates the streets

We wail and gnaw
The Marleybone

S’the Mawgah dawg
We wail and moan

Knives grooving
The alleyways

Steel whets
The appetite

Hurricane Ganja
Tears Babylon’s walls

Gate of Rasta soul
Cries out One Love

 

 

Authors and Madpersons: qbit and Jilly
(plus Unindicted Co-Conspirators)

Renga Challenge – Raccoon Bones

Jilly’s September Casting Bricks Challenge.

Renga – Raccoon Bones (qbit/frankjt)

Raccoon bones
Litter the rocks

Striding through the backyard
Coyote

Snarled tracks in snow
Prowl the sliding door

Flick of a light switch
Scamper of footsteps

Cat
Is MIAow

Urine puddle
The late-night cleanup!

Dog
Is paper wolf

Barking chorus
Racing deer

The eyes, the eyes
The eyes, the eyes

Last clatter
The waning moon

 

 

Authors and Madpersons: qbit and frankjtassone

Renga Challenge – Raccoon Bones

Jilly’s September Casting Bricks Challenge.

Renga Challenge – Raccoon Bones

Raccoon bones
Litter the rocks

[Your couplet…]

[Repeat 5x]

 

Administration, Thoughts, Plots, Plans &tc:

OK, I think this is a Renga of unstructured couplets for two people, but certainly fun if folks want to do one with more people, although then we’d probably want 20 couplets instead of 10.

I’m hoping that by keeping each writer to two lines, our push/pull on each other stays strong, but leaves enough room to develop a new idea, pivot, etc.

PLEASE SIGN UP IN THE COMMENTS BELOW, and we will work out logistics and kick off the working version in another post.

This is another attempt at a group Renga, part of Jilly’s September Casting Bricks Challenge.

More background and thoughts on Regna: here.

 

 

Pillow Talk

I am but a minstrel, a singer of songs.
A righter of wrongs.
And I sing to make my mistress happy.
And I sing to bring her peace.

When my voice and my lute
do not suffice,
I unsheathe my sword
And I become….

Well, actually, sort of depressed.

Working recently
At being more honest
With myself –
It’s just a plastic sword

From one of the kid’s
Halloween costumes.
And I don’t really have a lute, it
Was more like playing air guitar.

What did she say in therapy last week?
That for once she wanted me to take
The trash out without having to ask?
Just once?

Lord I hope though
She still likes the love poems
I leave on her
Pillow.

 

Charley’s first half: Minstrel

For  Casting Bricks Challenge.

Blow

drifting into the Vanguard
in ’61, Trane blows a blue-bottle
fly into my silken ear

a nightmare
pursues me
through the streets
allowing a taxi
to precipitate me
home where I have never been

the blue-bottle fly
tips back its longneck vodka
bottle brown

horse fly
trying to find that fine
fine vein
shoot high then squeal
the tires and the reed
bent all the way to Harlem

 

Jilly’s first half: Trane Blows

For  Casting Bricks Challenge.

Renga – Jumpstart (Qbit/nosaint/Colorful/Frank)

 

“28 Days of Unreason, Day 29…”
– Jilly & Co.

Frog and hare on edge,
Foxtail sways, old pond’s shadows –
Jump or not to jump?

Fox’s report splits branches
Allies leap in heartquake vaults

Lily pad launches
Lively ladybug among
Aphids airing out their woes

Fox slows down and all is well
Walking through the patient trees

Bated breath of storm –
Leaves anticipate deluge,
Hold sway in the boughs

Quiet rush ’til sky gives way
Painted gray shadow wings rise

Heron thunder bird
Races cumulonimbus
Clapping lake approves

Water waving through the sky
We are now a bigger pond

Frogs croak, old pond gone,
Nature breaks the covenant –
Sea and sky are one

One million hop-lake tadpoles
Mother clouds shoosh that racket

Fish fragment the noise
Gluttonous gills gather light
arc pearlescent sky

Pond grows calmer colors rise
Rainbow over bright rainbow

 

 

Authors & Madpersons: Qbit/nosaintaugustine/Colorfulpen/Frank Hubeny

Casting Bricks Sept Challenge

Renga – Jumpstart (Qbit/Jilly/Charley/Madaket)

“28 Days of Unreason, Day 29…”
– Jilly & Co.

Frog and hare on edge,
Foxtail sways, old pond’s shadows –
Jump or not to jump?

Tortoise shows to nose the hare
Frog legs leap, avoids the soup

Frog bumps hare in Spring
Hare bounds into the tall grass
Startles bedded dear

Impertinent deer, “Oh dear!”
Fall wisdom nixed Spring fancy

Zen Master lovers
Fold paper cranes with Basho –
Order and Chaos

Learn, then break the rules, says he
Radicalizing the form

Winter eyes the cranes
They Spring into Summer flight
Faux birds take the Fall

Into old pond’s dusk waters,
Hibernation stills the beat

Fox spits paper bones,
Frogs croaking frozen dinner –
Lovers Leap gone cold

Sandhill cranes take up the call
Mates for life, return to pond

Deer at edge of pond
Drinks dusk water as sun sets
Tall grass splits, hare springs

Sunlight catches water’s edge,
Laughter leaps in Basho’s eyes.

 

Authors & Madpersons:  Jilly/Charlie/Madaket/Qbit

Casting Bricks Sept Challenge

 

 

Casting Bricks – Renga Challenge Overview

Hi everyone, this page is meant to be a Resource/Home page for Collaberative Renga in Jilly’s Casting Bricks Poetry Challenge.

For this Challenge, the idea is to write Renga together. Renga is a traditional Japanese poetry form (it is where Haiku orignally comes from), but at its most basic it is simply writers taking turns and writing a poem together.

We’ve done a few of these, and the results have been great.  More importantly, it is a huge amount of fun.  The poem takes wonderful twists and turns as the writers co-create.  Some examples are below — read the final poem first, and then all the comments so you can see how interesting the interactions can be.

 

Getting Started:

“Start” a Renga with a post for the challenge, and drop its link into Jilly’s Mr. Linky. Put the word “Renga Challege” after your name, such as “Qbit Renga Challenge”.

If people want to join in the fun, they sign up in the comments on the challenge post.  Then the author can “launch” the working Renga with a new post.  Everyone then enters their next lines in the comments of that post.  The person who started the post can move lines up to the top as things are completed.  With more than two writers coordination can be complicated, but all part of the fun.

In the top of the challenge post, put in your prompt or theme if you have one.  Then set out how strict the form will be (or not), and whether you want an open-ended free-for-all, or if you want to try and write something thematic/coherent.  Also a target number of lines or stanzas if desired, and how many participants you may want at max. Feel free to link to this page if you want others to have some reference.

Background:

There is a good definition of Renga at Poets.org, good examples at The Wordshop, and more than you ever wanted to know about it from Jane Reichhold’s extensive, lifelong exploration of Haiku and related forms: Here and here.

I learned a great deal from reading Jane’s work, and recommend it if you are interested. Certainly there are very strict, traditional forms of Renga, but there are also plenty of interesting variations where the forms are minimal, or even non-existent. Jane herself published many Renga that were just two poets alternating single, free-form lines.

So when you start your Renga, decide how strict or loose you want to be. For the most strict definitions (syllable counts, season words etc.), there are line-by-line specifications you can follow if you search around Jane’s pages.

The other main thing I learned was that Renga tend to unfold in two ways: sometimes the writers make an attempt at cohesion, or the Renga may evolve like an ever-expanding kalaidescope. Jane suggests that you might want to decide that beforehand. Best also to set a target length as well if you are attempting something you want to come to conclusion.

 

 

Renga – Jumpstart

“28 Days of Unreason, Day 29…”
– Jilly & Co.

Frog and hare on edge,
Foxtail sways, old pond’s shadows –
Jump or not to jump?

[You’re Next! – 7 Syllables]
[7 – syllables]

[Repeat 5/7/5  7/7]

 

Administration, Thoughts, Plots, Plans &tc:

OK, this is my attempt at a group Renga, part of Jilly’s September Casting Bricks Challenge.  Some background and basics on how I think this might work are here.

The “theme” or prompt is the quote on top.

This collaboration is 2+ person Renga in a lightly traditional 5/7/5, 7/7 (repeat) format.  Target of  12 stanzas. By lightly, I mean no need to stick with the specifications for Renga that go down to the line level (although nobody would stop you).  Feel free to use nature as a springboard (or not), use season words if so inspired. Let’s go for the most interesting, completed poem more than worry about anything else until we get better at it.  Down the road we can try for tighter rules, fewer rules, or no rules, or all in combination at once!

Jilly, Charley, Madaket and I will do a test run of the above challenge to shake out how this will all work using blogging tools.  But if people are interested, sign up in the comments below and either we can kick off the same theme/starter lines in a new Renga with others, or we can start something new, or invent your own. I suspect that it will take a bit of coordination and planning between the authors to kick one of these off, so let’s use the comments to sort all that out, then launch the actual collaboration post.

Here is the basic theory of operation: writers will copy their next stanza in the comments.  Probably best to include the line you are pivoting from.  Then the “owner” of the post will move them up to the top, so there is a nicely formatted version when done.

If anybody has other ideas or experience with all of this, please don’t be shy.  We have no idea what we are doing, which is really great. Uncertainty at its best.

 

Quadrille of Unreason

“There is a human wildness held beneath the skin that finds all barriers brutishly unbearable”
– Jim Harrison (Day Four – 28 Days of Unreason)

 

She collects whispers from the menagerie,
Breathes the restless prowling
Back to me.

Who is this silkwife – spinning threads of touch
From the tangled desire
of moths?

My arms swing her up in their trawl –
She knows catch and release,
The leap of endolphins.

 

Quadrille #39 — dVerse Poets Pub